its not bad
Not bad considering your pretty new to the program. Again I have to say it needs some effects, like reverb and EQing. I did like the string sound you have in there, it was pretty nice. The overall sound of the song is good, i enjoyed the flow of everything, it just needs some more work, keep at it, your improving...practice practice
Woohoo, I wanted a review to this one, because I was doing something completely different. Alright, I'll figure out how to use that EQ and the reverb and hopefully use them in my next piece. Thanks for the review, it helps me strengthen my resolve.
On the other hand, it looks like someone voted 0 on all of my songs... everything that was 4 or higher has now gone down to 1 or 2. Sigh...