I don't know about the last review - I personally loved the strings. The short attack on them almost suggests something like an accordion or possibly harmonica - but it works either way. I think it adds just the right amount of surrealism and interest. Don't change a thing about the strings.
I really liked the concrete percussion towards the end but I wasn't crazy about the police sirens - just an opinion though. I thought it would still give the impression that you were after even better without them. Perhaps better still would have been a couple of ever so slightly detuned air-raid sirens in place of the law enforcement/emergency vehicle. Still - just an opinion and I respect your decision to do it the way that you did.
Great melody and accompaniment - chord progression was really damn nice.
sounds really cool but the violin synth/pad could use some brushing up...
it sounds like it's missing something
lol dude, i spent ages on the violin making it sound the way it did. It sounds perfect. It's meant to sound lonely and sad, not jazzy and leading. thanks for the nine though dude!!
i love your work
i like how the guns and sounds are almost perfectly synched on the strings
that's because every sound you hear at the end is individually sampled and individually tracked and individually placed so they are perfectly in sync XD takes forever!
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