Very Upbeat, I happened to like that because its a little different than most people do it. Good Job!!!
Isn't it ironic.
We'll start at the beginning i guess...
1) That jet-plane-wannabe sound you had at the beginning was so painful to my ears I almost turned it off right there...but I stuck it out...Unfortunatly...
2) Color me crazy, but this sounds A LOT! like the Techno Remix of the Terminator Theme done by "45288" on This site, with just a few annoying sound FX added in...Not to mention his was submitted in April of 04', yours was submitted in October. You had 6 months, and that's the best you came up with?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.