ANother 8, lol.
Only cause I know you'll get better.
One of the pieces of advice given to me recently, which i wish i had known earlier... is to work on the quality of my percussion (drums, hats, snares, etc)... not only getting nice VST's but also learning patterns, and stuff. Go on the net and search how to play the drums... it makes the biggest difference in songs.... seriously, wish i had known drums alot sooner...my pieces are usually absent of good drums. But hey this is soothing and nice on the ears.... great song..... honestly, i liked the the whole thing.... just keep making songs, you'll get it as you go along... just get really familiar with all the cool stuff you can do with you program... which sounds like FL studios, but i could be wrong.... just get familiar.
Ciao, oh and 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1