has a great love song feel to it. You've done a pretty good job with this. Its nice to listen to. So its more of a remake then a remix? Either way great work on this track!
Thanks wyldfyre, you are my inspiration!
Improved so much
Wow, holy shit this was absolutely incredible. I loved the original, but here you simply improved. It feels a little lighter from the start, the instrumentals just don't feel quite as grungy as they did in certain places previously. That one spot I previously commented on may still be there, and I still recommend removing it, but this is all around a great track. Nearly everything is working now. However, I now notice that in a couple of spots the track seems a little bare. For example, right around the 55 second mark, the casiotone (I think it is at least) is playing out while the melody is in the background, and in other cases too, the melody should be brought out more. Also, the grungy guitar comes in at about 2:55 also, and that is once again distracting. Lastly, the end seems a little un-climactic. The build up is there, but then there is just one little note to finish it, and I feel like the melody-carrying instrument should have the final note. These are my only possible complaints, though, as this is a fantastic piece of work, and you certainly deserve recognition for it. Keep the versions coming, because at this rate you will shortly have a masterpiece.
You had me at "Wow, holy shit". I will release version 1.2 tonight, but right now I'm actually having PC problems, I just hope my computer keeps working for a little while longer so I can get these songs out there before I reformat. I'll send you a message when I release it. Thank you for your reviews as I see as you as the most helpful other than myself in improving this song.
5/5 10/10 again. But now, you deserved them. No really, you did!
Thank you tictacmint! And I greatly appreciate your votes, hopefully version 1.2 will deserve it even more!
i love this song
and you made it better.
even if it was just changing the instruments.
Haha, thank you, and I'm going to make a hopefully even better version tonight. I still want to fix some parts. Don't worry this is still a work in progress, so if you love it now, you're going to love it even more.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.