Hm...
This isn't bad, but you might consider making a more defined lead-melody, this one was just too random and improvisational to be listenable easily. Also, try not to have the 'Pan' of the slide/bend tone all the way to the right. Believe me, it can get really annoying if you're wearing headphones. With some more tweaking, this could turn out to be a good song. Oh, and try to set some reverb for all of the tracks to make them sound a bit less hollow-sounding, it helps most of the time.