New beat I made with an old school sound with the sliding synth. Kinda did the "Garden Grove" trick by overlapping the synth, but it sounds alright and it will probably sound different on the final cut. In the mean time, let me know what you think. It took a total of 8 patterns just to mix shit up, made in less than 20 mins. Might get rid of the hit, tell me what you think.
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The high hats are to loud. The piano is to quiet. Try redoing volumes.
The melodie sounds pretty oke. But try making it a bit lower. These high notes are making me confused. Sounds like I'm doing some kind of hearing test.
Don't get mad cause I only tell the bad things ^^ Just only mentioning those because that is what needs to be redone. There are some pretty good things in there
ahh dont worry about it man, at least you approach it with constructive criticism, and thats what i wanna hear. But yeah that was an issue, but after i got the riffs together i wanted to post a demo, and im still working on it, right now as a matter of fact. I appreciate the feedback and ill work on it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
IrishDrunkPunK 
