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Jul 2, 2008 | 1:35 AM EDT
File Info
3.3 MB
3 min 35 sec
4.05 / 5.00

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Rated 4.05 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
839 Plays | 80 Downloads
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Author Comments

If this the first time you heard me
Man It wont be the last
ill crash ya down like two towers
with a kamikaze blast from the sky
cant deny
but I still try to
an realize
whatever size
those guys act like
they'll stab you in the back
when they tryin to come up
in the game
in the frame of carefree lifestyle
ridiculously insane
they might try to be sly with a little lie
but it wont go by with me
but they insist
an im pissed
don't want it to end so violently
so they lie to me

why does it have to be so necessary
the inflation got the whole nation hatin
our fuel station like hitler or satan
takin half what we makin just for general transportation
suppress our generation
invitation to wastin
inflatin the pockets
of corporations
us all
were takin the fall
forced to be caught in the loop
perpetual cycle of deceit
constant liars and thiefs
pull the carpet from our feet

flat on our face we fall
predetermined decided
by our predecessors
guided by the temptations of judas
seclude us
on a single planet
god damm it
ive had it
its sad but
what can ya do
when give it your all
but you still lose
skimpin our compensation with the acclimation
they need it irs deceive it to the fullest extent
like paying rent for existing
its twisting our perception of value and worth
so who does it hurt in the end fool
disposable humans are moving and reproducing and using
not given the option for choosing
never gaining always losing

torn tattered shattered souls
roaming throughout the earth
robotic neurotic society has now given birth
to a generation with potential conflictions
religious contradictions
media got your back fact into fiction
they got there hands around your neck
never cease the constriction
that's why im sittin bitchin an im askin this question



Rated 4 / 5 stars


its ok but, you need to drop the lyrics i think it ruins the beat otherwise nice job.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very good

It had a surprisingly stunning flow after you started off, and it kept me listening. However, the starting beat needs to be a bit more powerful, and try to bring the the volume of your voice up, but bring the tone down. Other than that, I found this very amusing, and I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.

Brihi24 responds:

Thanks bro i appreciate the constructive criticizim