Feel the flow
My favorite was from 0:57 to 1:19. Too bad it had to end :(
If you could take that and make it longer, you'd have an instant hit.
It builds up fantastically until 1:32. I feel like it should keep going right there--it ends too soon. Just keep adding or dropping one instrument like you were doing.
The ending was good, it just came too soon.
thanks for the crits! i definitely see what you mean with it ending pretty abrubtly and i'll keep it in mind when i revisit the song.