I liked this version, you added some nice effects in it. I thought it sounded a bit more dreamy than the original. Especially the flute at the beginning part and at the end was very nice. I thought the electricish piano sounded a bit less good though. I think I would´ve liked it more of it sounded like a real piano, but it was still alright.
Overall 8 out of 10, 4 out of 5. All in all I thought it was good, I liked it. Hope to hear some more of you, keep up the good work.