Sounds like a good start for your 4th album. Keep up the great work. I'm sure the improvements will come as you develope it into a full song. Like I said, it has great potential.
Thanks very much! We will probably develop it to a full song and then the hidden track(oops! well, it's not much of a HIDDEN track now...) will feature vocals and stuff.
Sounds awesome. Finish it for sure.
thanks, i'll finish it soon :D
Kinda like Coldplay in a sense.
You kinda lost it at around 20 seconds.
But it gets productively better as it plays.
It could afford to be a little in sync,
But suddenly it speeds up around 55 seconds and then slows down.
Keep good tempo...but that's simply with practice
Keep at it! You're only getting better even when it doesn't seem like it.
thanks for another very helpful review! again, this is unfinished. it will get better when it's finished.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.