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You Looked Better w/ Anorexia.

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This is a thing i made on fl studio demo, with those free beats u can get on modernbeats.com (not an advertisment, nobody wud pay me for that lol)

ps newgrounds needs to let users have longer titles, because now mine just looks stupid with the w/

i will give the first second and third reveiwers a smile, a wink, a car, and a 5 to each submission they have, and a reveiw to everything and all, if you care, but the reveiw has to be a real reveiw, say SOMETHING about the song, and ill even 5 u and everything if you dont like it.

but remember, zeros are for heros, and your not a hero, so dont give me a zero, give me a 1 if you really hate it, and leave me a reveiw why, this is about getting higher scores, but its also the fact that zero means NO effort was put into the product, and thats just not true on this song

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need more to the song, seems like the same thing over and over


yea thats what alot of ppeople think lol

call me a dick but...

the track doesnt have any direction, its just a few loops over an over - try varying it i.e. verse 1, verse 2, chorus, verse 1 modified, verse 2 modified, chorus etc

it's not bad

it's a little repetitive but i can deal with that, the little drum solo at the end was a little...it didn't really fit...but it's not that bad at all...just not in my taste...but keep on making more, i can't wait to hear what else you got for us! ^_^


yea the drums at the end sounded good the first time but once i listen to it here im like WHAT WAS I THI NKING

yea it is repetitive sorry haha

Nice start

I like it. Interesting. Would make a good begining of a song but where was it going.
What made it not so good was there was no building to a climax, No real other movement. I heard a few changes here and there but to the average listener it will sound repetitive. I say work on it, build on it, and make it into something better.


thanks, im glad you liked it i didnt realize how boring the song was till i put it up here and the drums and stuff were way more pronouced in an earlier version i had and that gave it much more variety

too bad im using the demo for fruity loops so i cant go back and fix it lol

Credits & Info

Waiting for 1 more vote

Jun 30, 2008
12:28 PM EDT
File Info
1.1 MB
1 min 16 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.