Needs improving!

Alright do yourself a favour, when you make your music don't just throw odds and ins into the track, listen to your effects combine them into sound, make the flow go with the beat and make your track slowly, there is no rush to success here comrad, take your time when making music as its a delicate procedure one wrong move and it can turn noses upside down, but otherwise its a good start to your first track, you just need to work on your timing, beat and also your speed. 5/10 for now.