it was kinda dry and dull, but you did get all the basics right, just need to work some on your sounds and the quality of you overall song =]
mmmm good with a few flaws
i really liked it starting at 50 seconds but most parts sounded a bit off beat. if u cleaned it up a bit it could be amazing so keep it up good job
Not a bad track
Especially not after the drums die and that synth kicks in heavy with flange, but the main problems I had with it were the intro synth pulse was offbeat with the drumline, then the gate on the flange synth made it pulse slightly out of time as well, so it could have used some cleanup. Otherwise great choice of instrumentation, the drum patterns were superb and good choice on the hats. The kick could have been a bit stronger, it gets drowned out by the main theme after all the instruments drop in around 3:00 or a lil earlier. Altogether a really good try at the Trance genre and not a bad listen.
The simplicity of this song makes me feel happy.
Great try, man!
I give you 9 points as a motivation for further work.
I hope my english is OK, i'm from Poland.
I like it. Not overcomplicated at all, just right.
I can definatly see this being used in a music vid or cut and used in an action scene or what not... heck, if a loop could be made it wud make awesome menu music.
I am so tempted to have a go at some fbfish stuff that could use this, if I wasn't up to my arse in projects as it is lol.
Keep it coming!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.