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hey guys, this is my first song so give me some constructive criticism like if you don't like the song tell where i need to change it

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Nice job!

Ok, so it has a couple of mistakes here and there, no biggie... This is a quite decent piece of music. The production quality is good! The recording quality is good, the instrumentation is good (especially in the second part), the tune is catchy. I really do like this!!! And I'd love to hear a complete song from you!

On a more constructive note, you really haven't done much panning except for the double-tracked acoustic guitars and the automatic panning of some drum parts. Everything else is centered. You should try widening your stereo mix. You could at least move one electric guitar half way left and another halfway right.

Anything else is too picky to comment even for me... Great job! I'll be waiting for that complete song!

Great job

The drums are just slightly too soft, but otherwise there's nothing really worth complaining about. I really enjoyed listening!

HEY OMG!!!

I KNOW U DUDE! u play Domo right and the name is Mclane???? u know my cuzin newmoonflower???!!! :D good song btw 10/10 5/5

Hey that's catchy

Nice job man that sounds great. I gave you a 5 because i didn't want to bring your score down with a four. But I think it is still deserved.

mclanecat responds:

hey thanks for the review and the vote

Nice job!

You did nice job with that music! I agreed, maybe you need to work on the electric (solo) guitar a bit, but another ones, tune, melody, anything is really good!

Keep it up! :)

mclanecat responds:

yea but practice makes perfect!

Credits & Info

Author

Listens
1,384
Faves:
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Downloads
93
Votes
7
Score
4.71 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 28, 2008
12:05 PM EDT
Genre
General Rock
File Info
Song
2.9 MB
2 min 5 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.