this is some cool stuff! However, I think theres alot you could build on. I would have stronger drums, ones with a little more kick, although I definately liked the toms, they sounded true to the original. However, what made the original so good wasn't the melody, it was all the little sounds thrown in in the background, along with alot of ambiance. To improve this remix I think you ought to work on adding more drums and percussion sounds in the background, and adding more ambiance; in the original there is ALOT of ambiance sounds, and your song has almost none of this. Overall, theres some good potential, but I think it needs some work before it will really do justice to the original. Keep up the good work!