Not bad for being new to the program. I think the drums need a lot of work, though it might just be because I don't like the genre those drums usually fit into.
The piano had a few out-of-key notes, and the choir was too quiet. I did enjoy the main tune, though :)
I would normally give this probably a 6/10 or 3/5, but 10 and 5 to help you get further. :)