Hm...

A very awkward sample. The beginning part where it looped sounds like it was poorly put together. Touch that up a bit, and I'm sure you'll get the sound ya want. Now, when the actualy beat drops, it sounds like it's just a beat drop in general, but then just loops itself. If you used the melody in the very beginning after 4 or 8 bars, would've been perfect. Then the stalling part that's at 1:13 feels overdone. Putting that at like 2 or 4 bars would've been good. I also noticed you added some melodizers in the back once the beat comes back in, which does give it some kind of transition, which is always good. But once the way it changes up at 2:16, I felt that part just needs to be removed completely. Doesn't really fit the mood, just kinda destroys anything that was there. Then you brought it back in, but with the same stuff that was there earlier, which is good as a filler. Also, your fade out is too long, and feels kinda bland. Have a steady fade out, which usually anywhere between 10 to 15 seconds. I hope this review helped ya, because this is a pretty fuckin nice sample.