Nice

Great song man, but I feel like I could make some suggestions in order for you to get to around Zajed's level no offense. Heh, well yeah, here they are:

-Beat is a bit too overpowering over the other instruments, and speaking of the beat, I feel like you could vary it in general like at the song refrains or something, but that's really up to you.
-The strings sound kind of artificial and bland at times, like at the entrance at 22 seconds. I feel like you could incorporate more melodies that complimented and intertwined/flowed with each other in order to make the song sound more powerful in general. The weird pinging sound that started around 1:03 I felt like kind of detracted from the song. It just simply sounded weird...
-The cymbal crashes were kind of loud.
-The brass sounded pretty good, but like I said before, vary the melodies a bit, and that leads me to my next suggestion.
-Vary the whole song in general, it gets a bit too repetitive near the end, but it's not that much of a problem.

But yeah, all my bitching aside, the is a great song man, keep up the good work and keep this stuff coming, 4/5.

YOUR NOT CORNY!

If being corny means makin epic things like this that divert from the typical GANGSTA FUCKIN THE WHITE BITCH IN THE ASS CUZ HE DON'T WANNA LOOK AT HER FACE CUZ ALL HE SEES IS GEORGE BUSH AND HER PUSSY LOOK LIKE MADONNA'S FACE! then hey that's A-OKAY!

you used to suck big fucking balls

but now you're all epic and masterful and shit

Hey

hey man thats real good....i wish i wuz that good....if u want to look at my beats they're not that good though.