It sounds like somethings melting...
...in a really cool way xD
Giving you the good courtesy of reviewing you back, I really like the feel you brought about with this one, that cool knife striking sort of fx is pretty sweet and im a sucker for a beat that hips and hops. I reckon a "gangsta whine" sort of noise would go well, maybe even just as a distance bg effect, but apart from that kudos on the mood setting :)
Sick sounds, but..
I love this type of stuff, personally, amazing sounds. I'd maybe try sampling an old breakbeat for part of the track, to give it some additional continuity in terms of rhythm. Keep at it.
its cool as a rough draft sounds like some pharell shit. Which is cool I like his production style and this is alright for not being EQ'd or anything The kick drum is hard. and I like how u give it that brief pause and throw in a reverse bass or something of the sort it sounds like a space ship. decent stuff here finish it and upload it