uhhhhh.grt job

BUTTERSCOTCH!!!@!!! sounds cool but all i really like about it is the end part of it but i know im not better at making the drum n bass songs.sooo......iguess i could
say its kinda cool.i just dont like the beat changing so much i mean like half the song is just change,change,add,add.i know you could fix the start by not putting in the hi-hat sound in so early and not make the bass sound out place in the starting like make it loud just so quiet so i would give it a ten and put some more background sounds like maybe a little bit of bass and all.listen to paragonX9 you might learn something.
bass:5
treble:1
awesomeness:2(almost 1)

Wtf ?

Uh, did you even listen this yourself ? Tbh, this is just horrible. No offence.

the drums are too much

you didn't mix them well enough...
it is better than i can do but i suck at drums in the first place, thats why from now on i dont use drums