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At Journey's End - DEMO

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After that 8 minute song, I was really pooped, but this popped into my mind.

This is my first piano composition. I might make some modifications and submit a final song. So please tell me how I can improve on this song. I know I should make some more variations...My dad says I should take the delay off :/.


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Nice one

Not too bad. You could take the delay off if you wanted but that would take away the drama of the song. I like it how it is. Can't wait for the final


TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review man. The final is going to have to wait for a while though, because I just had a burst of inspiration....


This is great for your first piano composition, i love piano pieces and this is really nice, its got a lovely tuine to it and is fairly fast tempo'd which i like, not too slow, but even the pace of it doesnt stop it being relaxing, i like the little pauses in the piano every now and again, just before you start a different part. Excellent piece man.


Good demo

A very pretty classical song once it gets in gear a lovely track.

To begin with its fairly basic the piano nice but the keys, sound layed back and good introduction. The quality of the track is high and once it gets going about ,1 minutes the sound get stunning. With some beautiful music ,and the 2 munutes is the best a wonderful piece is played out. The finale is a lovely end we hear some superb, piano coming out. The short length is good to.

No real complaints maybe more sound at the start.

Overeal a pretty track.

review request club.

Good Job

It certainly does come together very well and such, everything sounds to be well played which is good and the whole thing does have a very calm sound to it which I like. But there is something about this I'm not too keen on and that's the lack of much background, the piano playing is very good but besides that, it doesn't sound like there is much here which makes parts sound pretty empty.

Where that are pauses in this, some sort of background could fill those in to keep a flow of some kind, but not to say the whole thing is bad. I've always like the sound of the piano even though I can't play it, lmao. So on that of the piano, great work, just I feel needs some background.



= Review Request Club =


First of all: The delay has to stay in there. It just wouldn't have such a great sound and wouldn't create such a good atmosphere without it.

Ok, that being said, you should get rid of the little pauses you make here and there in the song, or at least cut down on the lenght of the pauses.

You also should add some chorus, or some strings in here. Maybe a trumpet could work, too, if it is played very softly.

{ Review Request Club }

TheBellmaker responds:

I'll get rid of the pauses. fill them in with something interesting. I have a really low quality string sample that sounds like a really good chorus when its played really low. As for a trumpet.... I really dunno.

Credits & Info

4.44 / 5.00

Jun 26, 2008
12:25 AM EDT
File Info
2.7 MB
2 min 55 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.