I'm gonna review this song!
The beginning seemed a little too long-- the intro percussion, although complex, seemed to be a little lacking in the bass department.
The instruments that kicked later on, although they added some interest, did not contain any kind of hook to get me really interested in this song.
Keep going, though! It's obvious that you have an understanding of how beats and lead instruments work, so things can only keep getting better with practice.
Yeah, this is not one of my best tracks...
i'll be uploading some more soon though