Well...

On one hand there are few different sounds and most of which are raspy, but on the other hand the inflection is quite nice. But... I must say it doesn't sound like you put a whole lot of time into it.

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loved it , but if you would listen i have a sugestion or two for ya to make it awsom!

for you main sound, dont have a raspy sound, the song had a southing sound to it so a raspy sound realy dosent make it good at all... if you were trying to be different then you did a good job...
i would suggest to have more sounds as well... (it sounds like you only have 3 maybe 4 chanels going... try having a 5th or 6th working with your 2nd and 3rd... and having the 5th and 6th fadded with a different frequency... . . .
if you would like help in this matter the i would be honnored to help you out.

keep trying and i am sure that a masterpiece would be in your hands

ehhh...

Even though im a huge fan for what is love... =/
but this just sounds like u just put sounds on a midi file =/

and sounds too plain...