This song was done with my boyfriend and it is very meaningfull to me as it reflects back on my child hood and relates to how tough some life situations can be!
Please review and comment with helpfull criticism
Cheers
Hayz
Down N Dirty ent.
Great Job...
Just a few things...
I love the vocals but the lyrics could use more anunciation, and I think that it might be a little strong to repeat "I hate you," over and over again, but that's a personal preference.
I also think that the song could use some more bass, and I think adding a wind or brass, such as sax or flute, could add a deepert level to the song as well as add variety.
In conclusion, I think it's a great song that just needs a little "spit and polish."
Hey thanks heaps for your constructive criticism, it is helpful.
As for the song it was my first and as this was not the kinda of song that i would usually sing it was hard to do, it was sort of an experiment we are working on it to adjust a few things to make it better, the hate you was just the anger that i felt when writing the song and i felt nessacery to putr it in as this song was done to send to my mum!!!
Thankyou very much
Cheers
Hayz
Down N Dirty ent.
very meaningfull
yes indeed i shall say thanks to you BF for this wonderfull piece of music. also very good on vocals HAZY08.
one more thing, the opening sounds sad. ***sobbing**** not cryin' my vote to ya is 5/5 and 10/10.
once agian, good job and very impressive work.
Thnakyou very much this was my first song so it was hard but i appreciated ur response
Thanks
Cheers
Hayz
Down N Dirty ent.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Hayz08 
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