It was an alright peice.

I didn't really like it, it sounded really repeitive, like you had no other beats you could add in there. It just didn't turn me. I thought you'd add something really good in the middle, but nothing happened.

beginning = amateur.

or perhaps it isn't, but it sure sounds very amateur. sparked a fragment of my interest when the beat kicked in. sounds somewhat like aphex twin and i'm not a huge fan.

-consistent and repetitive (not a bad thing, you used the two elements wisely).

you have potential my friend, as i could hear very professional sounds. even
though i can make a melody, that's something i lack.

i'd play around with the filters and some other knobs with that low short synth in the beginning.

good work though.