i don't know, man.
to me, it just felt empty and i dislike that stock kick sound.
some professional sounds in here though.
also, get rid of those high pitched random notes and add a theme.
distorted music but i can see it being made into a consistent composition if some effort was put into it.
Thanks for the comment I will work on the suggestions you made and only one thing I dont really understand the theme thing hahah I only made this guided by what I feel so I really dont prupose a theme any idea of how to make it. Well thanks again for your comment and see my future work.