I don't even know what to say bout this one. I mean it's good but lacking something. Maybe some bass or some kinda epic part has to come in (possibly right after the build, it sounds like it should be there.) I really don't know but I liked it man. Good job 5/5.
don't throw it away!
it's a good beat and i like the buildup at the beginning, but what it lacks is it isnt catchy. it is though, complex and full of character.
i liked it, the melody is cool.
it might be cool if you have that sound that comes in at 1:22(the lead?) with the piano at the same time at some point in the song, i dunno =\ . maybe more bass throughout the song too.
anyways, nice song.
check out my music some time, its not too good but w/e
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.