couple suggestions; at :36 to 2:05 i think you might want to add a cymbal on the off-beats, and try using a bit more dynamics; at 2:12 you can make it really loud and give it a bass boost.
Sorry if these suggestions are no good, i've never made computerized music
Nice song, energetic, but when I thought it was about to start, it basically kept going. It got a little annoying after a while, too. But other than that it's awesome.
thanks for the advice! next time i'll add to my songs!
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