Hmm

The cube and bells melodies next to the piano sounded kind of cool, but the rest of it was off-key.
The drums were among the best aspects of the song, even though they lacked diversity and stayed the same throughout the track.
The ambient echoes was probably the most off-key preset i could hear, so, heres a few tips:
When making a background melody to something like a piano, make sure not to use sharp keys, and always start the background melody on the same key as the main one.
If things start on different keys and transition next to each other or play at the same time they dont sound so good.
Anyway, to sum this up, i think its quite good considering its your first track.
Keep making music and youll get better :)
6/10
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