I know I'm a little late, but anyways:
Really nice song!
Although it's not as polished as some other songs, it's pretty good. The part at 1:10 could have had a little mroe 'action' or something, because the buildup was pretty nice. At 1:23, the transition could have been a little smoother, but I really enjoyed how both melodies kind of joined afterward.
I'm pretty young, (not even in high school!) but I have a pretty decent ear. The part at 0:43 soudns familiar, maybe from Hero's March by Halcyonic FalconX?