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Uploaded
Jun 22, 2008 | 11:43 AM EDT
File Info
Song
4.1 MB
1 min 47 sec
Score
4.04 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.04 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,452 Plays | 111 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - General Rock
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Author Comments

Here's a little song about a girl I would like to date - I am so ridiculous when I try to talk to girls.

Lauren

You put your hand to your waist when you climbed the stairs,
I happened to notice that you are shaped lovely there.

Maybe you stand out because of that purse you wear,
and you are so vibrant whenever I see you here.

Can we meet up sometime and talk about anything?
You are the pretty girl I keep seeing everywhere.

Reviews


BlackNinjaWarrior93BlackNinjaWarrior93

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good song!

I liked it! Really great!

+ Good lyrics
+ Great use of instruments

Nice job, Tom!
Overall grade: A-


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TomBanks responds:

Hey, thanks for the review man.


SyntrusSyntrus

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Tom this Rulez!

Give me some lyrics we need to collab! the electronic instruments are great! Nice Work!


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TomBanks responds:

Thanks man, actually I've been thinking the same thing - I may send you some lyrics for one of your songs to see if you like them, sometime; your stuff is great. Thanks for the review, man.


BeanbakerBeanbaker

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Great Song

Are you by any chance going to use this song as (don't know any other words to say) enticement?


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TomBanks responds:

No - I would show her if I knew her better, though. Thanks for the review man.


TheFunDindongsTheFunDindongs

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Complete sexiness.

I want to ... you know... because of this song. Lol just kidding. Awesome song, nice guitar solo. I bet I'm better, lol no that was fuckin' awesome. Sweet job.


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TomBanks responds:

Man, you just gave me a hard laugh - complete sexiness? That's pretty generous. I listened to my voice a couple times and then went back to the recordings I took to look for an alternate, but I was reminded that this one was definitely the best of the them. Thanks for the review man.

Edit: I fixed a little vocal problem I had, now I like it better.


BBQSandwichBBQSandwich

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Is that you on the gitar?

And is that you singing?
That's so cool, the lyrics are nice but maybe add some extra, like a real story in some couplets about when you met or something :P
You're so talented man.
Maybe get a bit less distortion at the guitar solo,
then it would be an even greater song :P
Hope this will help you.
Keep it up!


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TomBanks responds:

LOL, there's not much else to add. Yup, that's me - thanks for the kind words man, and thanks for the review.