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Heavens Fury

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ok so the first part of this is from the Drifting in Heaven (DIH) track i did not long ago
someone suggested adding it into a trance song...

i was messing around with the FL Keys and found a neat... tune....
it was too short so i thought, what a better fit than DIH...
so i messed around for hours and finally figured out how to put them together...
now my main problem is, how can i make the second track less..... in your face.... youll know what i mean when it comes....

id like to have a buildup, as like... an angels is getting furious with something, then just snaps
any ideas? please message me if you can guide me through it, because im not familliar enough with FL to just be told "hey, change this and add this"

but i think from the meat and potatoes of music building i did a good job
please rate and review
thanks
~DJD

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Calm

Very simplistic... i like it.

DJ-Diceman responds:

thanks

I think it could be more powerful.

I'm reviewing as I listen.

So far, a very nice breathy entry. It's getting me to that high that I love with ambience. I do not recommend the rhodes FL has to offer though. Soundfonts, though huge, have much better sound quality. I say this because the vibrato of the rhodes is bringing me from high to haunted.

I realized this is a common mistake, but in the song you are colliding key signatures and the song's out of tune almost completely. I think this is because of the pad that is going very sharp. This is not your fault, but if you hear it, tweak the pitch so that it does not fall into a different key. I realize I'm being pretty blunt but I'm only doing this to help you. The percussion as well doesn't say ambience to me. It's a good start though. I'll mail you some improvements as you requested.

DJ-Diceman responds:

alright, thanks for the tips, i kinda get most of it and ill see what i can do
as for the ambience... i really didnt know where to put it, so i think ambience i the wrong spot to put it

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Jun 20, 2008
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3.5 MB
3 min 2 sec

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