Not bad man, you just need to eq your synths more in order to make them not sound so muddled together. I really like it actually as it keeps going. Just keep in mind about that eq or I can help you with it if you want. 5/5 8/10
Peace - //:-sr4clD-:\\
It sounds great till about 00:41 when you add another synth.
I like the rythm you had going, but the layered synths were a bit gut-wrenching.
Especially near the end.
I have a feeling you meant for it to be off-beat at the end.
Or maybe not but...