Everything is good not great!
The potential is there!
But the vocals are not only off-pitch at some points but also not tight!
Some vocals should be doubled up like the hook/chorus! Could go indie and eventually mainstream with but it would take an assload of work! Like how you made your voice suit parts of this son!
Dude, this is amazing.
I love almost everything about this song. First and foremost, I love what an amazing effort this song has had put into it. The song itself is something of quality that is rarely heard on Newgrounds. The vocals are interesting, the instrumentation fits in quite well, and it's ambitious. You put a lot of work into making this a song of professional quality, and I appreciate that.
The only criticisms I can offer are that the sound leveling is off (I know, the MP3 compressions does not do it any favors ) and the vocals had two parts where there was not a good progression of tone.
I cannot say enough how much I appreciate the effort you put into making this song. It is something that I rarely hear on Newgrounds.
Pretty good song here. Nice voice, nice lyrics, great beat, but the equalizing between the voice and the beat could be better. The voice is a bit too loud and kinda drowns out the beat. Now I'm not an expert on vocal mixing, but I think if you would turn down the vocals, it'll sound much better. Keep up the great work though!
5/5 - 3.47 / 5.00 (+ 0.56)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.