Nice lyrics but the guitar is fairly stoic. I most cases if the melody is decent it wouldn't matter. In this case however your voice is very plain with very little range and poor dynamics. I would recommend daily vocal exercises and push your limits often. Your are on key which is a plus you just sound like you are running out of air. All in all it shows promise.
this is short because my cat is in the way but the song was great and i really liked it. I've been listening to some rap recently so this was a nice relaxing song
Thanks for taking the time to review. It's good to not stick to one genre. Don't get me wrong, i enjoy rap too, but too much of anything can get boring.
very good it was a pretty well made song even for a crappy laptop microphone
k umm ure voice kinda trembles some times on the high notes i recommend you leave those alone and have your girlfriend to help you with them
also see if you can organize people who play other instruments into a band
just a thought
Yeah, don't have a girlfriend, but I think if i separate the tracks on an audio program, I should be able to put more focus in those areas. As far as other instruments, I have a couple of them laying around, and I can always add them as different tracks once I get the right software. So it's all in the works, these first few songs were kind of a test to see if it was worthwhile to keep pursuing this little hobby i've got going. And because of the great responses from listeners like yourself, i do believe i'll start investing in better equipment and software. Thanks for the reviews
You got something going here. I'd say keep at it.
I'm not an expert by any means. I'm still trying to teach myself guitar as it is.
Only thing I find distracting is the pauses after each verse. Other than that, keep playing!
Thanks for posting.
Thanks, wasn't sure about this song, haven't gotten much response from it since I released it. You keep goin on the guitar man. I've had a lot of people try to ask me to teach them how to play, and it got to the point where I tell them they have to WANT to play. Go to www.ultimate-guitar.com for some excellent tabs and some really good free lessons. You could also youtube it, not sure if there's much there, but I wouldn't doubt it. Anyway, thanks for the review!
i like this song. but again (like special day) i think you could add a violin part or something for some parts of this song. but it's still a pretty cool song.
I do have a violin, just haven't got around to learning how to play it. lol, It's alot harder to self teach the violin than it is the guitar. gosh, i think i've said this already. Anyway, i think if i get a fretboard for the violin it will be a lot easier to learn. Sorry If I repeated myself. Thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.