Good! 1:23 2:51 4:08
I like this after a minute or two through. I really dont like the beginning thoughl Its not that its bad, its just, the tropical bongo ish thing, it doesn't fit. Also, I think its way to repetitive in some parts, and makes it too long.
Okay to split it up a bit, did not like it up to 1:23 , after 2:51 its starting pretty good, nice meoldy, great instruments. I really like everything after 4:08. I prefered the lack of percussion in the sample, so I dont care for it all that much in this one. Either way, dont let me eat it up too much. It really is good, its just my taste it doesn't match~
Great work here! Since the first seconds of the song you start moving your head haha, the song flows quite nicely but Im afraid you left a big part of the song (From 00:00 to 1:53) without a bass patern which made lose the danciness(if thats even a word lol) of the song.
Well the bass pops up and the tune flows nicely, adding even more percussion which is good, but its getting a lil bit repetitive, okay the song stops at 2:45 a you left the synth alone, not bad but takes to much time to get on groove again and when it does you just repeated the whole thing again...perhaps adding a chorus there would be a good idea ^^
Okay the main synth fades away and stops the song again and here we are at the main melody of the song, very nice! But in my opinion you took to long to get to the main tune, you could add another chorus by the half of the song that way it will make it less repetitive ^^
I like the tune very much, but work a little more on the structure of the song ; )
Sorry for the low grade but I dont give 9s or 10s that often, your song is good just work it a lil more.
Well... thank you so much for a big and reasonable comment! I have reworked this song and made it a bit more of a dream house...