its good

reel good keep it up!

heel goed

heel netjes alleen net iets te loud, waardoor de rest een beetje wegvalt,ik beodl dus dat het mainsound, net te hard is, voor de rest super gedaan

billy

Good stuff

I really like the synth in this song, and it's evident that you put some time into writing in each instrument with a different part. A little more variation in the melody would give it more punch (I know the melody changes at 1:21, but the synth kinda overpowers any changes). Still, excellent song, I got it stuck in my head for a while now. So I guess that means it's catchy. Loved the chaos of this song too, the frantic element is what brought it all together for me. Good work!

Nice...

A very chaotic synth to open a song, but not bad, the song flows very nicely overall but gets quite repetitive after a while, try making a second melody that fits (similar to) the one that you got already and leave it for the second chorus and for the third you could use the main melody back again and then finish the song, well its just a tip. ^^

Making the second melody will be the tough part (a very dificult thing in music) but good variation is what really pushes a song beyond.

And again is a good project, you synths are good (try to begin the song with a softer synth) you bass is very original and your drums are exellent, just give more variation and it will be "perfection" ^^

I know ull figure out a way to do it ; )

Good luck!