Hmm...

I really like your core beat... But when the bass comes in it would sound better if you could turn down the volume of your core a little. Also it would have been better if you didnt repeat the intro, it was great once, and you only really need it once. Overall I liked it. The way you piece it all together sounded pretty good as well. The ending was great. Those few things is what kept this song from a 10... sorry bro good luck...