Gotta admit the beginning almost half of the song feels like a giant build up. With out a doubt you improved on the original. And after hearing your dub version as well I can't decide which I like more.
When the four to the floor comes in the song gets really fun and pleasing to listen too wish theres was more of these moments in this song. Great lead works.
I like the six and ambience of the dub version and I like the drums and overall melodies.
Thanks for the fun listens and comparisons! I love personal or" self-made" remixes.