I like it so far, but there's just not much content to review I do like simplicity. It's just seems like an intro since it's so short and no large changes in the song. I do like it though and hope you work on it. Try adding more instruments or some other effects to your song. I wish you the best of luck on your future projects and hope you work on this and turn it into a great piece of music.
Hope I helped,
haha thanks yeah it was just a real quick intro i put up here cause my AIM wasnt sending it to a friend, didnt think people would actually listen to it.
Little long before anything happens & then nothing... It seems that this is only an intro... It needs the rest as well before you submit unless its a loop in which they are short like this... Not a bad start