the 909 /808 drums spoil it
Its not bad mate, some of the samples sound like they're not quantised properly.
There needs to be more variation. the bassline doesnt do very much. add some slides / porta and make it more distorted. it sounds like a detuned saw, which is fine, but some imaginitive fx would liven it up somewhat.
but my major gripe is the use of the roland tr909 / 808 samples. thats what drags it right down for me!