You have a pretty decent song here. You managed to give a song a nice baseline and still mix it up a bit too. Still, there were some parts that were a little repetitive, but it didn't detract from the song all that much. I think you could really make something big out of this, I hope you finish it later and submit it! Keep on making music.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.