the only thing I recommend is making it longer. Otherwise it's a very wonderful piece of music.
"how I might improve this"
Gurl, this piece of music literally is one of the best piano pieces of music I have ever heard. Improvement is never needed for something as well made as this. It is the kind of music where you can even feel the emotion. It's the sort of music that can change a bad movie into a master piece. Saying you've come a long way in music since you've made this is an easily believable statement after hearing this. I just want to say you did an exceptional job with this and makes me glad to know there are great musicians like you.~
The song... Instruments of what would happen to my gf. if she were to die by the hand of a human being... It would end my life the way her life did... if she were to die a early death by the hand of a human being... i will kill him... i will make sure the air he breaths will be the very last particles of air to enter his mouth... I will kill those who were to ever harm the love of my life... i will KILL...THEM...ALL!!!!! I do Apologize for the rambling. That girl is everything to me. and if she was gone from me i will not even have a thought to live... What im trying to say is that this music would enter my brain if she were to die...
There was once a girl in my life whom I thought the world of, but alas, that relationship didn't work in the end. I hope you are more fortunate and prudent than I was.
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Very sad. It expresses the aftermath of a ravenous war, or when you lose somebody you love.
A lot of people seem to get that image from this piece. Thanks for sharing!
this sounds like something that you failed at with no hope left :(
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