Hmm...interesting.

I'll say this was a good effort. For being bored, this is certainly not a bad creation. I rather enjoyed it.

To be honest, though, it got old after a while. You might want to fluctuate your percussion a little so that it's not so constant. Also, adding a little more bass wouldn't hurt.

Hope this helps.

---Thomas-Moffitt Stage

auch

hmmm, u could've blended in some other effects and maybe made the drums more exciting? cause this was way to boring.

-Beating-Source-

It's OK

Keep it up.

Suggestion

Fluctuate your bass. Imagine your self getting sucked in and out of some intense pumping mechanism. Make the bass like that.

Enjoyable!

Bad:
Funky break in beginning part
Too repetitive before first transition
Could use more reworking than just the beat at the beginning
Just a bit too repetitive over all...

Good:
Love the idea
Good basis
Love the really tech style in middle
Alot of potential!

Too have just been bored this was really good though!!!
I really enjoyed it :D
Thanks for submitting it!