kinda repetitive but overall it was ok ^_^
Almost a finished song...
A decent concept just it needs some umph! to it. I don't think its a finished song. Maybe if you spent some time on changing some stuff to it, it would be. And Intro is a little long like you said. Just mix some stuff up like fade left to right or change the drums a bit. Check out my stuff youll see what i mean.
I completely agree, but again its a really old song and my new songs are more complex.