Well...

It's just way too messy. I can't tell what you're going for. It sounds like you have two songs trying to play at the same time. Try taking the guitar out, and using it later in the song without the synth. Then it wouldn't sound so cluttered.

nah man

yea man it was a valid attempt had a lot of potential but u didnt quite hit it. what couldve been a harmonic fusion of techno and metal tured into chaos man once more good try uve got what it takes but u need to spend a lil more concentration next time sorry man

They're Coming

Listening to this I got more of a, let's say, slow paced fighting scene. Too many instruments were used all at the same time so really get a feel of anything. Next time I would suggest using the different instruments at intervals, or syncing them accordingly, because it was all together a little confusing. It had good potential, but in my honest opinion, it was poorly executed. Another thing I think would help is to set it up so the sound rises and falls at different times, so you can picture them getting closer. Anyway, it's all up to you. I wish you the best of luck in the future.

good job

keep it up