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[Buyj3llo] - Waiting in line

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Through my head phones this sounds great, but on my computer speakers it sounds kind of empty. I need to figure out how to make songs that sound good no matter what kind of speakers their played on. I think the most obvious thing to do would be to work on making actual melodies, but I still suck at that. oh well, practice makes perfect.

I shorted this by about a minute to make it more listenable.

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It's great, try doing some research on tonal balance, the problem is that commercial headphones usually blast the low and high frequencies, so if you dont balance it out it will sound very different on different speakers. Hope this helps.

Haha, that white noise clap/snare is killing me. We all started somewhere. Glad these still exist for our listening pleasure. :)

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Not bad, but I wish there were more of something, can't put my finger on what though. keep it up.

buyj3llo responds:

yea, sounds a bit empty. I doesn't really have any melody to it. I need to work on that.

Not bad

I like the beat though it was kind of harsh coming through my headphones (could just be me). I think it would benefit from shorter times between the transitions of sounds. For example; the first type of beat goes on until about 1:10, maybe half that time before the next type, and shorter times all around would make this stronger. Keep practicing, and good luck.

buyj3llo responds:

Thanks. I agree, it does need to be shortened. If you can believe it i had already shaved an entire minute off of it. I think there just wasn't enough content in here to be a song maybe. It's like a really big stretched out loop.

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Jun 15, 2008
12:27 AM EDT
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3.4 MB
3 min 46 sec

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