We Are All Forsaken (DEMO)

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Hey, this is a short demo of a WIP for me. It's my first hip-hop song and I am just posting it for some feedback, ideas, pointers etc. I hope you like it :)

The title comes from the song "Forsaken" by Dream Theater in which I used and modified the main piano from.

The timing is weird but its on purpose, to give it a little character ;)

Oh yeah and make sure to crank the volume!

Thanks to my bro jhende7 for helping me out with this one. Check out his new beat too :D



This is great!

I have always liked the song forsaken from Dream Theater, and the way you modified it......It's amazing. You made it so different yet it still has that feel of the original song from Dream Theater, I don't know if that is what you were going for, or you were trying to do something totally different, but either way I like it.

OMGL33TH4X0R responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it, maybe one day I'll finish this ;)

A unbiased review

OMG I havn't even seen a loaf of bread that's as oven fresh as this beat. If I wasn't so busy stakin out turf in the ghetto with my homies I'd come give you a gold chain and a xxxl t-shirt. We should collab on some more hop-hip and I'll spit rhymes for fat hooks. All da ladies in da club will be nake to dis fat feat of musix.

Peace G and keep on keepin on keepin.

-jhende (white)

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OMGL33TH4X0R responds:

fo' real bro, keep it G, dawg

nice, but...

i like the mood of the song...everything fits nicely, but I would suggest changing the notes of the bass...it sounds like the same note over and over again, and when the chords are changing...that note doesn't always fit. Know what I'm talkin about? I think if you wanna keep one note for the bass, make it the same note as that string-like sound u got in the intro. It'd fit much better :D but overall good job, you got my 5.

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OMGL33TH4X0R responds:

thanks man, I think I'll take up on your tip and change the bass a little, thanks a lot for the review, its why I posted the demo, to get feedback, thanks a lot :D

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Credits & Info

4.18 / 5.00

Jun 12, 2008
9:11 PM EDT
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
3.3 MB
2 min 8 sec

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