yo, you reviewed one of my songs and i followed the your user link to your home page and I read your message up top about how you were angry at the users of newgrounds who smashed your song. Well, you aren't the only person who is pissed about injustice to good songs. So I'll be true and truthful.
Ok, your song's initial sound is really good, especially when the soft snyth comes in at 1.06. The soft hip hop beats with the pads is really soothing and matches very well. The song transitions very smoothly. So this song has some gold elements in it.
I think the main reason people shot your song down, after listening to the whole thing, is that it needs to change more. For example, in the middle of the song stop everything and have a sweet slow synth solo that has nothing to do with the chorus. Then smoothly flow back to the original sound. The key is keeping peoples attention. No matter how awesome a song is, if it doesn't have alot of changes and movement, people bomb it.
Overview: Make a remix of this song, make it less repetitive, be spontanious in a smooth way to fit the sytle of the song. If the votes don't change after you do this, screw the users who killed an awesome song.
Till next time, peace bro -Bracksta
Thank you so much for the detailed review. I love getting nice little tips from the people on here that actually know what they're talking about. I'll have to bear your advice in mind for my next song. I'm just trying to progress slowly as to not show people my "learning" phases in music. If you get what I mean.